10/1/14 - WE

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2015 ENTERTAINMENT BOOKS STILL FOR SALE
SELL FOR $30 - COLLECT MONEY AND BRING TO MR. GENTILE
$12 DOLLARS IS CREDITED BACK TO YOUR ASHLAND ACCOUNT

HOMEWORK CLUB CONTINUES 
WEDNESDAY &; THURSDAYS  2:15 - 3:15


still DUE:  ROUGH DRAFTS for all nine chapters of MIB (mini illustrated booklet)

           Each chapter worth points.  Roughs will be just that -- rough, sloppy, messy
           Rough drafts give you something to work with, to revise, change, correct
           * for viewing only, teacher will not keep
           * show me rough drafts between now and Tuesday for full points
           * rough drafts are a separate grade in Synergy gradebook (will be on progress reports)
           TEACHER TO VIEW ONLY -- NOT KEEPING ROUGHS (student keeps to work on)

grammar review
Ia.  PROOFREADING WARM UP (w/proofreading
- review (quick) proofreading marks sheet
- edit/proofread sentences provided (Daily Oral Language #1)

Ib.  APPOSITIVES and APPOSITIVE PHRASES
- recognizing and practicing use of words or phrases added to a sentence to modify a noun
- use/look for examples  in Mini Illustrated Booklet


II.  FAMILY TREE - chapter 10
- continue towards finishing question sheets (discussion, use of notes)
- read chapter 10
- note shift in character as plot "thickens"
- how has story changed from the start?
- focus on words or actions or phrases that develop theme, major ideas
- use of imagery and tree motif
* key word/image notes in spirals as teacher reads
 - CHOICES vs. "easy road" vs. accepting consequences
- focus on why author uses the word "plunge" to foreshadow

* * * * *
HOMEWORK - adjust plan according to YOUR schedule
* * * * * 
__  continue/finish ROUGH DRAFTS for MIB chapters IF NOT DONE
      * Mr. Gentile checking RD's for grade Mo-We  (late score afterwards)
      * begin proofreading/revising and start final drafts  if done with RD's
__  continue MIB VOCAB/GLOSSARY (final versions or RD's)
     * 20 extended definitions AND sentence for full A+
     * lower grade for fewer words or less detail(finish THIS week)
__  create MAP for MIB (of your person's world)
     * in place of weekly geography crossword

With TEN DAYS TO GO ON THE MIB, you should be planning how you will finalize your book.
What paper will you use? Will you write or type?
What is left to complete?
GRAB paper from Mr. Gentile.
Revise rough drafts of the chapter text.
Finish the glossary.
You are trying to finish early.
Due 10/10, but there is not school that day.
Finish and turn in 10/9 or work on all day 10/10 and turn in by end of day or send copy to Mr. G
via email.